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Done for the character of Kylukaaru, an odd looking animal standing about 5 feet at the shoulder, heavy set in the chest area with webbed, dextrous front limbs and long, powerful back limbs with more paw like feet, a long, rudder like tail, lots of extra fur over the neck area, the nape, some down the back and lots over the tail, strong dual horns on the head, one long, straight set merged with ram horns. Kinda a mix between otter, canine/feline, kangaroo and lord knows what else. Her species is called an Okkynúkain and I should draw a picture....
/ this means I'm not yet sure, she's not properly developed yet
O means yes
- means no
[/]has control over an element [[Not sure, she might have some power over water as it is her natural environment.]]
[-]can breathe a certain element
[-]can control/breathe ALL elements
[-]has an object of power
[-]uses ancient items
[O]is a leader [[She leads a small group of Okkynúkain.]]
[-]was born with immense powers
[-]has a hidden power that he/she doesn't know of yet
[-]doesn't know his/her parents
[O]lost one of his/her parents [[She's not a youngster any more, her parents died of life and old age.]]
[-]can shoot lasers from their eyes
[-]have a state of immortality
[-]were murdered and have come back
[-]can use a Bonkai [[wtf is a Bonkai?]]
[-]have bones sticking out of their body
[-]were in a horrific accident
[-]shoot fire from their fingers
[-]have a super-sonic roar
[-]can create earthquakes
[-]happen to be a black and red dragon
[-]can use jutsu [[is that like Bonkai?]]
[-]fight with a sword
[-]fight with a/two guns
[-]are a ninja
[O]lost both of his/her parents [[See above.]]
[-]has an unusual eye colour
[-]has another form
[-]has more than one other form
[-]can shapeshift
[O]has a scar [[She has plenty, comes from being alive and not living a pampered human life.]]
[-]doesn't bleed
[-]can't be hurt
[-]has an evil side
[-]can kill Gods
[O]goes to other dimensions [[Her species is originally from Velysiria, which exists in an alternate dimension and has a few gateways to Earth. She currently exists in Earth but was born in Velysiria and will return there before she dies.]]
[-]has unusual coloured blood
[O]is venomous [[Her species is naturally venomous, the name Okkynúkain literally means 'poison mists' as the species is poisonous and originated from a misty place on Velysiria.]]
[-]has solid coloured eyes with a slit
[-]has glowing eyes
[-]has black eyes
[-]has no pupils
[-]has two tails/four wings/two heads/etc
[/]is a rare species [[Well, her species has three 'types' of sorts, one that lives in cool waters, one that lives in very hot areas and one that lives in icy waters. Kylukaaru belongs to the type that live in icy waters and this type is rarer than the other two.]]
[-]is the only one of their kind
[-]can bring back the dead
[-]is invincible
[-]is immortal
[-]is a god/goddess
[-]has the power to corrupt others
[O]uses magic [[All Velys creatures have some natural magical abilities.]]
[-]can possess others
[-]has the power to destroy the world
[O]can unleash a devastating attack [[Well, she is, essentially, an animal, and a large and magical one at that. Teeth, claws, venom, brute strength, magic and intelligence are a pretty good combination for defending yourself.]]
[-]wears jewellery or any other object to hold back their power
[-]killed a friend/family member
[-]is part of a prophecy
[-]is "the chosen one"
[-]can travel through time
[-]can stop time
[/]has super speed [[Her species is pretty quick, especially when in water.]]
[-]eyes can change colour
[-]never bleeds
[O]has toxic blood [[Part of their venomous capabilities, I need to think more on it though.]]
[-]has a royal/important family
[-]they can create force fields magnetic fields
Final score: 9-O 3-/
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1-8 = poor, boring character
"You need to spice them up a little bit, give them some more interesting points"
9-25 = interesting/well balanced character
"Your character is well balanced and catches peoples attention. It would be possible for your character to exist in the real world"
[[Haha, I'd like to see Kylukaaru exist in the real world....]]
26-37 = borderline character
"You need to dial down your character. You're hovering over the line, and you really don't want to go over. If you cross the line there is not way your character could exist..."
38-65 = IMPOSSIBLE CHARACTER
"Your character seriously needs to loose some powers... This is nothing more than an overly-powered character that cannot, and would not ever be able to exist. Dial down on the super-amazingness otherwise no one will like, or respect your character or you."